the little mermaid my version

Sorry this is kind of a long one and I hope you enjoy it Please comment!! The kelptic is a play on words for the Celtics. this was just for fun... :)

A sudden noise woke the princess from her sleep. The sound came again, she got up to look out and see where it came from. What she saw greatly astonished her, she was so surprised that she began putting her cloths without even a second though where her maids were. She ran down the long hallway to her parents chambers. When she knocked the door flew open and she was quickly drawn in. She said "why are there men and sea horses below at this hour?" but her question had no answer, no one knew what was going on.


Down in the city below a messenger rode in upon his sea horse bringing news from far away. The men and boys wondered what news would come at such a strange hour? Why all this stir? But their question was left unanswered as the princess's was.


Back at the castle the messenger arrived with the news, the Keptic people had invaded their land!! They were spotted riding their sea horses and in great number. Now the Kelptic people had a great weapon that killed many men. Their poisonous sea weed arrows were a thing to be afraid of.


The men gathered in the town square wondering what the messenger would say to them. The messenger said “men of the Coral Reef, The kelptic people have invaded our lands!” there was a great hush that fell over the crowd, “I have been sent here to tell you that every man capable is to be ready by dawn tomorrow. Bring your swiftest sea horse and your most courageous men because we are going to conquer the Kelptics once and for all!! Take courage men and be ready when the time comes.” So the messenger left and a great noise went up one of determined men who took pride in fighting for their country.

In the castle another stir arose. The king who was also Ariel’s father didn’t want to let his daughter fight in the war. She had been trained from a child to be her father’s right hand women (her parents having no son) but he seemed reluctant to let her go when the time actually came. After much persuasion by both Ariel and her mother Ariel was finally permitted to go.


At the battle field it swung between chaos and an organized chaos. There was one part of the battle that to this day Ariel is famous for.

The Kelptic people were surrounding them and the men were losing hope. It seemed that the battle was indeed lost. But all was not lost! Ariel organized her men and suddenly the kelptic's started to fall back. The men took heart. When the battle was finished the men thought over the battle and the older men talked with the younger men about battles of old but none could think of a more courageous leader then Ariel.

After a fortnight of battles they return home. It was a joyous occasion for they had conquered the Kelptics! The awards were given out, Ariel received the honor of becoming queen over the new lands.

Ariel lived her life in prosperity in this land of the Kelptics. The people loved her and served her for all the years that she reigned. It was truly a happy ever after.